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It is 16 years since the song called "We Are the World" was made. Thanks to this event, the crisis in Ethiopia and in other countries in Africa seemed to be avoided for the time being.
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However, in Guatemala of South America or in the Philippines of South East Asia, there are children living on a street corner or in a rubbish heap. In Mongolia, there are children living through a very cold weather by gathering themselves up in a manhole. There are children who have no parents or no family, and who do not even know why they were born.
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There is a serious matter occurring in the countries known as advanced countries. In this uncontrolable "storm of information," news could connect world information to people but heart to heart. All the tragedies on the screen are treated just as topics of popular talk shows until they realize the seriousness of the problem. When mutant children start to give a battle cry through people being affected by information, understandable madness would strike people.
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"What we can leave for children." There are so many problems to be solved. Polluted land, forest desertification, somber air, and the seas where all the pollutants are dumped. The societies, which spoil human heart, is hurting wild human heart more and more.
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The world is facing a new problem now. We have come to the time to decide to leave "negative legacy" behind, or to erase it.
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We have to appeal to children, and lead them. We believe that we can have "hope" in the critical conditions, and the power to solve problems is the "passion" to turn the "dream" into reality, and the feeling of "sympathy" is the only bridge connecting people.
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We would like to gather various children and grow their friendship in order to let them sing songs in many languages, to let them keep their eyes on severe problems and to let them share with comrades all over the world through a lot of singing voices. We have suggested this project as the dawn of creating a new century under these mutual understanding.
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- 校正後 -
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It is 16 years since the song called "We Are the World" was made. Thanks to this event, the crisis in Ethiopia and in other countries in Africa seemed to be avoided for the time being.
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However, in Guatemala in South America or in the Philippines of in South East Asia, there are children living on a street corners or in a rubbish heaps. In Mongolia, there are children living through a very cold weather by gathering huddling themselves up together in a manholes. There are children who have no parents or no family, and who do not even know why they were born.
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There is a serious matter occurring in the countries known as advanced countries. In this uncontrollable "storm of information," news could can connect world information to people but not on the heart to heart level. All the tragedies on the screen are treated just as topics of popular talk shows until they realize the seriousness of the problem. When mutant poor children start to give a battle cry through people being affected by information, understandable madness would strike people.
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"What we can leave for our children." There are so many problems to be solved. Polluted land, forest desertification, somber dirty air, and the seas where all the pollutants are dumped. The s Societies, which spoil the human heart, is are hurting wild human the natural heart more and more.
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The world is facing a new problem now. We have come to the time to decide whether to leave our "negative legacy" behind, or to erase it.
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We have to appeal to children, and lead them. We believe that we can have "hope" in the critical conditions, and the power to solve problems is the "passion" to turn the "dream" into a reality, and the feeling of "sympathy" is the only bridge connecting people.
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We would like to gather various children together and grow foster their friendship in order to let them sing songs in many languages, to let them keep their eyes on severe problems and to let them share this with comrades all over the world through a lot of many singing voices. We have suggested this project as the dawn of creating a new century under these this mutual understanding.



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